Sanctified but Hypnotized by My own eyes and Pacified.
Pursuing desire Wanting to go higher Sinking into mire Hand outstretched.
Race is ending Outcome pending Comprehending Price was paid.
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I had to read this over a few times to get to the "meat" of this---I like you use repeated rhymes, and the words are powerful, needing no adjectives to interpret their meanings. What were you feeling when you wrote this? What was the message you wanted the reader to get? Intriguing, XOX Mom
1 comment:
I had to read this over a few times to get to the "meat" of this---I like you use repeated rhymes, and the words are powerful, needing no adjectives to interpret their meanings. What were you feeling when you wrote this? What was the message you wanted the reader to get? Intriguing, XOX Mom
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